Sunday, June 5, 2016

Messy but splined

Hello all! Hope everyone is surviving the heat!

Soooo I have a rough splined out shot. Not easy with everything I have going on in this shot.  I hope it's holding up well.  The timing is roughed in.  There is NO offsetting yet.  I just wanted to see if everything is reading.  I've shortened the walk in. and right now it's starting at frame 10 which I can add to sober sisters hold at around f87 is.  There's constraints that I want to hold off moving.

For the most part, is is working? Thank you in advance!! Ellen

http://www.syncsketch.com/playground/941ca7f54adb420b83ecafc5f352aad7#88171

3 comments:

  1. Hi Ellen, good progress! Most of it is working - there are two areas that feel rushed to me right now. The first is the sigh, which I think you can overlap with her starting to crouch down to give it some more time. The second is her lifting her drunk sister's arm at the end. Maybe she can adjust her glasses with her left hand so that her right hand has more time for the arm grab? You don't need the hold on the arm at the end either - let the action of the arm lift continue to the end of the shot. Let me know if that's not clear.

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  2. Hey Ellen! It's looking good! I don't remember if Victor told you to take out the beat where the younger sister looks out towards the door to see if she hears her parents, or not. And I think that the shoeless foot of the drunk sister stays on the bench too long when she falls over. It's reading pretty clearly to me though!

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  3. Hey Ellen! It's looking good! I don't remember if Victor told you to take out the beat where the younger sister looks out towards the door to see if she hears her parents, or not. And I think that the shoeless foot of the drunk sister stays on the bench too long when she falls over. It's reading pretty clearly to me though!

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