Sunday, June 5, 2016

Just a quick thought..

Hi Victor,

Before I head into splining, I wanted to pop this on here to see if the changes I made per the notes in class look ok.  I'm mainly curious if you think the girl's reaction/sigh around fr 139 reads for long enough.  It feels a little quick to me at the moment, but I know I'm over frame limit!

 http://www.syncsketch.com/playground/cad1427b9459458ea314d929ace0d960#88119

Thank you in advance!  To splines I go!

Jamie
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  1. Victor NavoneJune 5, 2016 at 8:14 PM

    Hi Jamie, this is looking good! I didn't read the change on 139 as a new attitude the first time through; it almost looks more like a small relaxation before the turn. If you want that beat to read you're going to need to give it about 8 more frames.

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  2. Jamie RyanJune 5, 2016 at 8:31 PM

    Thanks, Victor!

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