It looks good, the only comments i have would be when she says Kendra i feel you can exaggerate the pose and time more. Sharpening the timing then having a hold after that so when she says "this is a motorcycle" it would create the beat and make it the motorcycle feel important to her. The other comment i have is when she says soul reason is to go fast very fast, i feel like she can look at kendra at very fast rather than when she says fast.
Hi Andriy, looking good. You've made good progress from the last showing but there are still some beats and actions that could be clearer. Start her already in her worried "kendra" attitude at the beginning of the shot. She saw the problem as she was approaching, and she should be anticipating the dialog with her face and hands. I wrote a few other notes on SyncSketch as well. Thanks for posting!
Hey Andriy,
ReplyDeleteIt looks good, the only comments i have would be when she says Kendra i feel you can exaggerate the pose and time more. Sharpening the timing then having a hold after that so when she says "this is a motorcycle" it would create the beat and make it the motorcycle feel important to her. The other comment i have is when she says soul reason is to go fast very fast, i feel like she can look at kendra at very fast rather than when she says fast.
Otherwise looks great :)
Mostafa
Thanks Mostafa!
ReplyDeleteHi Andriy, looking good. You've made good progress from the last showing but there are still some beats and actions that could be clearer. Start her already in her worried "kendra" attitude at the beginning of the shot. She saw the problem as she was approaching, and she should be anticipating the dialog with her face and hands. I wrote a few other notes on SyncSketch as well. Thanks for posting!
ReplyDeleteCool! Thanks Victor!
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