Friday, May 20, 2016

Plane ride storyboard


Hi everyone, 

Here's a quick and dirty update on what I was thinking for my shot. Please let me know what you think. I'll just be setting the scene,but I just want to make sure I'm going the right path before I'm too deep in the blocking. 


Scenario 1



Scenario 2


Thanks! Hope this was clear!

8 comments:

  1. Hi Jenny,

    I think I like your Scenario 1 best. I think there is some opportunity for a bit of comedy in the man's look behind the chair (your 3rd thumbnail), maybe just showing his eyes and brows or something.

    Maybe that's just me, but I like the payoff of seeing him from the kid's point of view during the shot. :) Hope that helps!

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    1. Thanks Jamie! appreciate the ideas and your opinion :)
      Scenario 1 was my gut feeling, but wanted to make sure with you guys, so thanks for the confirmation!

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    2. Thanks Jamie! appreciate the ideas and your opinion :)
      Scenario 1 was my gut feeling, but wanted to make sure with you guys, so thanks for the confirmation!

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  2. Hi Jenny! I too like the 1st one. It's more of a payoff to see the kids' reaction as well as the old mans. It'll be a little more work and hopefully it'll be within the time limits, but I thnk it'll work. Will be fun to see where you take it!

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    1. Thanks Ellen, yea I'm concerned about the frame length too, but I'll make it work somehow...
      I was thinking scenario 1 too, but it's good to know that others agree :)

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    2. Thanks Ellen, yea I'm concerned about the frame length too, but I'll make it work somehow...
      I was thinking scenario 1 too, but it's good to know that others agree :)

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  3. Hi Jenny, Thanks for posting. I like the 1st one too. You probably don't need to show the hand holding the airplane if you're going to show the kid in a new shot. Looking forward to your next pass!
    -v

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    1. Good point about the plane with the hand, I guess it would've been pretty repetitive.
      I was thinking Scenario 1 too, so I'm glad I'm on the right path. Thanks so much for letting me know!

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