Sorry it took so long to post these:
Lip-sync
Multi-character scenes
A private blog for Victor Navone's "Advanced Animation Critique" class at the Animation Collaborative, Spring 2016 session.
Thursday, June 23, 2016
Sunday, June 19, 2016
Weight and Hitch
Hi,
I hope everyone had a great weekend!
Victor, I was wondering if you could take a look at the hitch that was happening when the girl stepped back from the mirror, as well as her weight around fr 90. I moved her foot so it was under her body more. I haven't delved into her arm/hand animation or the eye direction quite yet.
I was also curious if you could refresh my memory about your note on her shrug. It seems that when I was writing my notes in class, on one line I only wrote, "shrug should be more." Lol very vague on my part. Do you think it should be more emphasized? I'm planning on showing her exhale and her nostrils flaring, as you suggested, as well as fixing her hand plant on her hips. I just feel like I'm forgetting one bit...
http://www.syncsketch.com/playground/330970ee6b774288ae3d7aab61cfd549#90080
Thank you in advance!
Jamie
I hope everyone had a great weekend!
Victor, I was wondering if you could take a look at the hitch that was happening when the girl stepped back from the mirror, as well as her weight around fr 90. I moved her foot so it was under her body more. I haven't delved into her arm/hand animation or the eye direction quite yet.
I was also curious if you could refresh my memory about your note on her shrug. It seems that when I was writing my notes in class, on one line I only wrote, "shrug should be more." Lol very vague on my part. Do you think it should be more emphasized? I'm planning on showing her exhale and her nostrils flaring, as you suggested, as well as fixing her hand plant on her hips. I just feel like I'm forgetting one bit...
http://www.syncsketch.com/playground/330970ee6b774288ae3d7aab61cfd549#90080
Thank you in advance!
Jamie
Sunday, June 12, 2016
IP
Hello!
Well I've tackle the notes from class (working on sober sisters exhale, and her arm at the end. As well as drunk sisters bounce after the fall)
I also was working on the sober sisters walk in and then cleaning up the first 58ish frames of drunk sister. Im feeling that her movement throughout that move (28-46 ish) is a little clunky. While working on it to clean it I think I'm fussing a little too much in areas. I don't know, what do you think. Thank you in advance!
http://www.syncsketch.com/playground/47d40e49a4704230bde78a27213f59d8#89434
Well I've tackle the notes from class (working on sober sisters exhale, and her arm at the end. As well as drunk sisters bounce after the fall)
I also was working on the sober sisters walk in and then cleaning up the first 58ish frames of drunk sister. Im feeling that her movement throughout that move (28-46 ish) is a little clunky. While working on it to clean it I think I'm fussing a little too much in areas. I don't know, what do you think. Thank you in advance!
http://www.syncsketch.com/playground/47d40e49a4704230bde78a27213f59d8#89434
Finally Splined
Hi,
This weekend I tried bringing the rest of my shot up since last class, and so now everything is FINALLY splined! Beware - the first 50 frames or so are really swimmy and looking a little shady. I'm also still working on the walk backward, but I thiiiink that's finally looking better.
Moving foward, I'm looking to add better transitions through the extremes and soften up the areas where the characters are hitting walls, along with offsetting, etc.
Thank you!
Jamie
http://www.syncsketch.com/playground/5bcd3a672c3b41ca93295a8da6ed940d#89431
This weekend I tried bringing the rest of my shot up since last class, and so now everything is FINALLY splined! Beware - the first 50 frames or so are really swimmy and looking a little shady. I'm also still working on the walk backward, but I thiiiink that's finally looking better.
Moving foward, I'm looking to add better transitions through the extremes and soften up the areas where the characters are hitting walls, along with offsetting, etc.
Thank you!
Jamie
http://www.syncsketch.com/playground/5bcd3a672c3b41ca93295a8da6ed940d#89431
Giuliana_Blocking_Pass
Hi Victor
Sorry I couldn't come to class on Wed, it's been a pretty busy week. Anyways, I finally finished my blocking for the shot so here is the link. It gets a little rough towards the end but I just wanted to put everything there so we could see it complete.
The animation gets up to 300 frames right now.
Here is the link
http://syncsketch.com/playground/97088943f8f743b5bdcd4b631a524555#89381
I put the quicktime file too just in case.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B6wHWTuTv94JVW8zTk9aMWlaMHc/view?usp=sharing
Let me know what you guys think
thanks.
Sorry I couldn't come to class on Wed, it's been a pretty busy week. Anyways, I finally finished my blocking for the shot so here is the link. It gets a little rough towards the end but I just wanted to put everything there so we could see it complete.
The animation gets up to 300 frames right now.
Here is the link
http://syncsketch.com/playground/97088943f8f743b5bdcd4b631a524555#89381
I put the quicktime file too just in case.
https://drive.google.com/file/d/0B6wHWTuTv94JVW8zTk9aMWlaMHc/view?usp=sharing
Let me know what you guys think
thanks.
Saturday, June 11, 2016
Sincere boy?
Not sure if it would be better to have the kid offer up his toy to gramps....but I felt like that's a pretty bold move considering he's a stranger. So I thought a shy wave might be better :) Please let me know what you think! Thanks!!
http://www.syncsketch.com/playground/eb2edbf0067041ad90ade26d2ddb0f98#89348
Also Victor, I wanted to think of ideas for my next shot. What should be next on my reel? I want to get rid of everything after 0:45. Please let me know!
https://vimeo.com/87952760
Have a great weekend everyone
http://www.syncsketch.com/playground/eb2edbf0067041ad90ade26d2ddb0f98#89348
Also Victor, I wanted to think of ideas for my next shot. What should be next on my reel? I want to get rid of everything after 0:45. Please let me know!
https://vimeo.com/87952760
Have a great weekend everyone
Tuesday, June 7, 2016
Jaw clench on Giacomo
Does anyone know how to make the jaw clench for Giacomo? I can't find a control that will do that...and scaling any part of that area just makes him look chubby....
Please help! THANKS!
Please help! THANKS!
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